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《我的错误》六百字作文？

在我记忆中的五味瓶里，我翻过了许许多多，大大小小的错误。然而，唯独这一个错误让我得到了一个沉痛的教训，明白了一个深刻的道理。

　　上课啦，当英语老师发下测验卷的时候，我心中的兔子跳上跳下的，弄得我浑身不舒服。试卷发到我手上了，我一看：“喔耶！我得了一百分！”正当我拿着试卷到处炫耀时，我意外地发现老师改错了一道题，这怎么办才好呢？无疑是对我的晴天霹雳呀！忐忑不安的我焦急万分。这时，心中的天使与魔鬼开展起了大辩论。魔鬼说：“主人，快点趁没人时改了答案，这样，主人您才会得满分！”天使又争着说：“主人，您千万不能改呀，要对得住自己的良心！“主人你管他说个狗屁不通的，您还是快点改了呀，不然没时间啦！“主人，诚信是金呀，如果您真的改了，那也是个假一百分，那样，您就对不住家人，老师同学，更对不住自己呀！”听到这里，我后悔不已，我既想拿一百分，又想讲诚信。正当我急得头昏脑胀时，我突然想起关老师曾经说过：“做人要讲信用，所谓‘一言既出，驷马难追，’这样才会得到别人的尊重。”这时，我站了起来，大步流星地走向讲台告诉老师我的真正得分。尽管我从一百分变成九十八分，可是，我心中总有一种说不出的高兴，可能这就是面对错误的双重效果吧。

　　从这次错误中，我明白了：做人一定要脚踏实地，不做愧对良心的事，这样才是从错误的道路上把脚收回的好孩子

作文《错误》，怎么写？

每当我想起那件小事,心里那道伤痕再次隐隐作痛。

记得那次放学,我兴致勃勃地冲出校门。在路上,我发现了一位神态怪异的大姐姐。我听旁边的人说:“这孩子真可怜!生下来就有智障。”我对这位姐姐充满了好奇,我便仔细观察她。终于,我发现她有一个爱好,那就是她喜欢模仿别人。

我眼睛一转想到,我轻轻打自己,她有可能重重地打自己,那才好玩呢。打不打?我犹豫不决下不了手。这时理智先生和欲望先生出来了。欲望先生抢先说:“去吧,去吧,赶紧的，不然待会儿她走了。玩呢么,反正也没人看见,再说疼的也不是你。”理智先生马上斥责到:“主人,别听他的。他会把你引入歧途的!”。欲望先生马上反驳到:“主人,别听他满嘴胡言!我支持您,她那么蠢也不一定会学。就算打了也不一定..........”欲望先生滔滔不绝、头头是道。理智先生又一次恳切地说:“小主人,拿别人的痛苦来娱乐难道是对的?你要三思啊!”

好奇心在怂恿我,不甘放弃的恶念在纠缠我。我踌躇了一下下,还是站起来走向了那位姐姐。我站在姐姐面前,对着她轻轻地打了一下自己的脸。那小姐姐先是看着我,接着她缓缓地举起手朝自己脸上打去,“啪!”声音很响,很脆,她痛苦地抽搐了一下,脸立刻红肿了。出乎意料的是,我却并不开心,反而心中有丝丝内疚似的痛。不好,她妈妈来了!我像兔子见苍鹰似的逃了。

我逃脱了那位妈妈的责骂,却没逃脱自己良心的自责。这件事常常让我感到后悔,我想对那位姐姐说,我错了,请你原谅!在你面前,真正残疾的是我!

作文审题错误,满分30分，扣几分？

• 觉得前面考得不错，就看作文了，小学六年级，上，要求让我写一件事，我写了三件事，扣分在几分到几分以内？题目是“她是我的榜样”，在线等，有问题再问！！
• 作文评分一般是先定档，再适当加减些分数，偏题一般最高归在第三、四档，即6-18分

英语作文，帮忙看一下有语法错误吗

• Shall we take an active part in the sports meeting?Our school is going to take place a sports meeting.Some students are looking forward to taking part in the sports meeting.Others suggest that it will waste too much time.In my opinion, a sports meeting can relax us from our busy study.As a saying goes,"All work and no play makes Jake a dull boy,"A sports meeting can add excitement and interesting to our study.There is no doubt that it is important for us to have sports.During the sports meeting,students can build up health and win honour for their class.Its surely a good teamwork.All in all, we should take an active part in the sports meeting.Its not only help our class win honour but also help ourselves build up health.
• Shall we take an active part in the sports meeting?Our school is going to take place（take place 发生的意思，学校应该举行hold） a sports meeting.Some students are looking forward to taking part in the sports meeting.Others suggest that it will waste too much time.In my opinion, a （前面提过，后面再说就特指用the）sports meeting can relax us from our busy study.As a saying goes,"All work and no play makes Jake a dull boy,"A （the）sports meeting can add excitement and interesting（这是个形容词，后面要加东西，比如，activities） to our study.There is no doubt that it is important for us to have sports.During the sports meeting,students can build up health and win honour for their class.Its surely a good teamwork.All in all, we should take an active part in the sports meeting.Its（去掉is，help加s） not only help our class win honour but also help ourselves build up health.英语基础很扎实，继续努力哦

请求大神帮忙修改我的作文语法以及其它错误

• Propaganda is a form of inaccurate information, and this has always used to influence people’s attitudes, opinions, and thoughts toward a particular thing. The militarists had always exploited the propaganda to manipulate people’s minds, and they created hatred for a particular unprofitable group or a state. Meanwhile, the politicians also used it to develop negative motivations were beneficial to them in a similar way as militarists would do. Also, the propaganda itself is used widely in commercial and religion in order to gain the essential support from people. The propaganda has the negative effects toward society, because it has always utilized by the militarists, politicians, and even human desires.
• 宣传是一种不准确的信息,这一直用来影响人们的态度、观点和思想对一个特定的事情。军国主义者一直利用宣传操纵人的思想,和他们创建了一个特定的仇恨不赚钱的集团或国家。与此同时,政客们还用它来发展负面动机以类似的方式对他们是有益的军国主义。此外,宣传本身是广泛应用于商业和r

作文素材 改正错误

• 古人
• 毛坯抈榣人家产有要不上班

请问这篇作文有语法错误么、、、帮忙改一下。。

• Dear Sir or Madam:I am glad to receive your letter, I am also a student who is keen on animals. You know that many creatures are living on the earth with us which make our life more colorful and meaningful. So, we must pay more attention to them, otherwise they will be extinct forever.Tibetan Antelope which is also known as The Hox Xil Pride is a animal which lives in the Tibetan Plateau. It’s a gregarious animal. But it’s horn and fur is also very expensive. So many hunters after killing them, peel off their skin, and pull out their horn to sell.As a student. Despite we can’t go to stop the killing. What we can do is to appealing others not to buy the things make of the horn, or the clothes make of their fur. There is a saying that: When the buying stops, the killing can too.I am looking forward to receive your letter about the protection plans of this animal.
• -你可以用There are many creatures lived on earth like us, 代替 You know that many creatures are living on the earth with us-However, their horns and furs are very valuable 代替 But its horn…-Therefore many hunters peel off their skin and pull out their horn after killing them 代替 So many…-As a student, we couldnt stop the killing but what we can do are appeal others…-There is a saying that stated: ….the killing stops too-最后一句…of animal like this.希望能帮到你，望采纳~

这是我写的作文中的一段，请问哪有错误？怎么改？为什么这么改？全回答我就采纳，谢谢。 I am de

• 这是我写的作文中的一段，请问哪有错误？怎么改？为什么这么改？全回答我就采纳，谢谢。I am delighted to receive your letter. I would like to share some advices with you about the method of read.
• read改为reading，其它都没问题，写得很好

求一个英语高手帮我改一下作文中的语法错误，留下邮箱！急！

• 求一个英语高手帮我改一下作文中的语法错误，留下邮箱！
• 长坂坡曹洪：“丞相你看！那个敌将又杀回来了！”夏侯惇：“今天已经是第七次了吧，他不累呀？”曹操：“可恶啊……一定要把我的人马全部杀光才肯罢手么！？”在乱军中奋战的赵云：“张飞这个狗日的！让我殿后又不给我地图，长坂桥在哪里呀”

我自己写的一个作文开头，评价一下，指出些缺点、错误，优点，还有一些改进。谢谢！

• 我自己写的一个作文开头，评价一下，指出些缺点、错误，优点，还有一些改进。谢谢！ 拥有渴望，感觉真好 迷茫过，却不知；拥有过，却不惜。在过去的日子里，没有思考过、努力过，仅仅感觉一切还不错。其实是迷茫了、麻木了，感觉不到。当自己对未来充满了渴望时，才发现自己依然有许多东西，需要去渴望、去追求、去完成，让自己幸福。
• 因为爱情，在哪个地方，依然还有人在哪里忧伤

请问谁能帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有错误

• 原文：My favourite movie is transformer. This film was made in America. It used a lot of high-techs and computer special effects. I like it very much. This film has huge scenes and famous movie stars. Besides, it has good story, and it told me to respect anybody protects us. This film asked us to be brave to fight the enemies and have the courage to live in the danger. It also have a lot of robot troys I like. This is my favourite movie.
• 对了很好要是再L加一点就很好了

求日语高手大神帮我看看这段作文的语法错误，跪谢！

• 日中の谚に犬や鱼や牛の周波数の顺位ほぼ一致して、数量の差も纸一重である。违うのは、日本の谚に鱼の数量が犬より多いである。そのによれば、家庭に饲われていた动物として、人间はそれらの生活习惯や性格特徴がよくしていって、常に物事の道理の比喩対象としてよく使った。谚におかける动物のイメージというのは、谚を読者はどのような连想をしているかということ。异なる民族は、动物に対する感情が谚に具体的な表现も违う。伝统文化に影响され、异なる生活环境及び考え方と生活経験が违うので、日中両国人民は同じ物事の道理を表现しようとしている时、异なる动物に関する谚を表现している。つまり、谚の意味が同じですが、使われる动物のイメージは违う。
• 你是中国人吗