改善的英文(改善很多英语)

1/improve释义：

vt. 改善，增进；提高……的价值

vi. 增加；变得更好

2/例句：

Her quality of life has improved a lot since her child started making money.

自从孩子开始赚钱后，她的生活质量就改善了很多。

3/improve的词组有：

improve efficiency提高效率

improve on改进；对…加以改良

improve in在…方面有改进

to improve the environment改善环境

improve uponvt. 改进

求大神翻译
所有的这些都在帮助我了解中国并改善我的中文水平All of these are helping me understand China and to improve my Chinese level

这关于The most crucial problem is that men may have poor teamwork with women. Men may think that the one who have ability have the power to lead the team and make decision by oneself instead of communicate with teammates. Women ,however, prefer to share ideas，discuss with teammate and convince the opponents in order to find out the consensus. Both characters is almost different, even against. When the men work with women, it may become a disaster. The confliction would occur frequently if they do not enhance the spirit of teamwork. Dictatorship is a hindrance to a successful teamwork. Seeing some helpful ideas raised by others may be ignored , how could we do nothing to improve the situation?
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这是我写的一段英文，有没有文法错误和可以怎么改善呢？
As e-book reading quickly becomes more and more popular, printed books may be fading away and in danger of being eradicated in the future. At that time newspapers, magazines, and novels would be on e-books mostly, and the hard copies would be hard to find. People who do not know how to use e-books, or not able to purchase the technological reading devices would found themselves dereailed in the society. Finally, there would be no need for any typographers because people would just be reading on the screens. This brings us to the obvious question: how would the underprivileged children be able to learn without books? Would it be reasonal to expect that every child has an e-book?花了不少时间。有问题请追问。

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第一句的one of 。。。后面的way要用单数，第一句复句太长了啊，看着都累，不要为了写复句而写，反而累赘。还有一些用法错误呢。。。细看太累了